What is your first impression about the preface of my book?

Students are constantly misinformed that %26quot;everything changes.%26quot; Does everything change? The propaganda that %26quot;everything changes%26quot; is propagated by individuals who want to 鈥榩rove and maintain鈥?their 鈥榮overeign intellectual supremacy鈥?by tampering the normal intellectual development of their fellowmen and women. How does the propaganda %26quot;everything changes%26quot; tamper the normal human intellectual development. The statement %26quot;everything changes%26quot; directly instructs the learners not to look for the things which remain the same. The statement that everything changes is true only to those who have no capacity to identify those which are common to all. Only those which are not common to all can be changed.





Is no identity common to all? No identity is a common identity to those who have no capacity to identify and compare the properties of more than one thing. Don't you have any identity which is common to all? Is there no need to know the identities which are common to all? The one without any identity cannot be identified. The one without the identities which are common to all cannot be analysed. Our thoughts, ideas, questions, writings and teachings cannot be interpreted without the identities which are common to all. This writing attempts to identify and list the common identities without which no study can be made. The students who completely read this writing will realize the essential role of common identites in their studies.

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What is your first impression with these lines?
What is your first impression about the preface of my book?
It seems really complicated...

are u like a wannabe philosipher? (sp?)
What is your first impression about the preface of my book?
Self which is not Worldly is same in all and does not change.

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OMG!! WHAT DOES THAT MEAN??
Heavy laden and verbose.
To be honest the first sentence isn't very good. I don't even think that students are told that %26quot;everything changes%26quot;. The whole thing is a bit wishy washy.
You start with a grand statement and then give no references or proof to back it up. How do we know that students are misinformed that everything changes? Are there any studies that you could point to which back up your claims?



Ditto for the following statements that individuals are propagating that everything changes who wish to maintain their sovereign intellectual supremacy. Who are these these individuals and how are they propagating that belief?



And why is everything changes in quotation marks, when you are not showing what you are quoting?



And so it continues through your writing. Any claims like this must be properly proven and referenced for them to have any weight at all. My first impression, frankly, is that you do not know what you are talking about and are trying to bluff your way through by making some grand claims.



Sorry if that sounds harsh. But with essay writing, particularly when you are trying to construct an argument that will persuade your readers, you must back it up with evidence.
You must be in the realms of TIME... Where everything changes as the Universe expand... but on immediate vicinity, nothing seems to change, in which we only compare them to those we chose to compare with...